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On da Beach! by thekidKaos On da Beach! by thekidKaos
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Poster design for a SUPER party. On da beach. In July! IN MEXICO!!! :flame::skull::headbang::skull::flame:
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Characters Marvel / DC
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:iconzachula:
Firstly, it's a really fun concept and very nicely executed. I don't have anything to critique except the overall flow.

You can see there's a whole scene going on but we've got a focus on Wonder Woman, so I feel like the other characters and environment could emphasis the focus. For example: Superman, Batman and Catwoman could all be moving to the left to lead the eye towards Wonder Woman in the center. Even some simple clouds in the top-right would help direct the focus.

Quite a small point but I think it would help.

Lovely stuff. Keep it up.
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Wow.
Never would have thought to make a fun pic like this. As Mr. Zachula said before me, the focus needs to be more the center of the piece, which is WW. Perhaps if they were looking her way? Superman giving a whistle from up in the sky?

Love how everyone is in a swimsuit. Why wasn't supes in one? I could see perhaps long beach shorts that are blue with a red stripe down the side, and him wearing a Blue muscle T-shirt with the S on the chest.

Otherwise, I think the drawing is pretty well done. Bravo
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himegirl15 5 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg I love this
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:iconciceromarcus:
I've always loved the beach themed pieces! This is a great one, captures my thoughts of the beach very well: fun, sexy, bright. 
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:iconprivatedoomsday:
Awesome work; this pic is amazingly well done!
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chrisdee Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I disagree with the critiques, a busty scantily clad woman front and center does not need background assistance holding focus.  The composition is well balanced exactly as it is.
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:iconartisticneutrino:
Superman bringing chilled drinks straight from the Arctic.
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:iconapocalipsis666:
nice world,  Wonder Woman looks really enjoying with the party,
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Doghcat Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This picture is FABULOUS. I love Batman in his tiny Bathingsuit still wearing the cape. And hanging out with Selina. And Spidey casually hanging upside-down. Nice work!
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:iconwarrior35:
Fantastic job!! Wonderwoman looks sexy!!!
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:iconalawrence20:
Nicely done! :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconericho:
I've been wating a great superhero beach picture so badly!
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